Friday, January 21, 2011
Do You Believe Edit
This one's more finished. I think the contrast works a lot better here (thanks Abby), the inclusion of the shadows on the thoughts makes the those really pop (thanks Mo), the hand rendered type is looking good (thanks Lance) and the exclusion of the girl in the top makes for a simpler, more intriguing image (thanks Sean), oh and yes, I made everything lowercase with a real apostrophe in "what's" (thanks Josh). Ya'll make a good critiquing team! What do you think now?
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Wow! It has come such a long way from the sketches to this perfect cut-out look. I love the colors and the composition. Much better than the blue back cover, also. That was too much, I think.
ReplyDeleteBut I'd love to see that light blue tear under her eye (or at least the same color) be put on the actual disc somewhere. To me the tear seems to be one of the hooks of the entire piece. Maybe make the ? blue and switch the name and the title . . . but that would be a drastic change from the cover since the title is above the image on the cover; it might break the consistency too much. I don't know.