Tuesday, September 29, 2009

Narrative in Sound & Motion: Final Storyboard

This is the final sequence of events - type coupled with image. I think everything looks good although I'm starting to wonder about the transition of events around frames 8 thru 10 now that I see it in color...

Here's a final, final version. I added the letters into frame 8. I think that will help the transition:
1. First we see the earth (letters) harden,
2. Cut to the image of the sky and earth (the bright sunlight really helps give the feeling of cold and hard)
3. Cut back to the letters cracking
4. Fade to the image of the hand poking a hole in the earth
5. Cut to the image of the hand planting the seed amongst the broken up soil (letters)
6. Animate the letters softening
7. Rest of the movie...

Sunday, September 27, 2009

Sample poster graphics

A few iterations of the original War Garden Poster by J. Paul Verrees, this time using ethos and pathos.


Saturday, September 26, 2009

Three posters, three modes of appeal

(Posters from the Boston Public Library on Flickr)

"The gentle art of civilized living" (1934)
Mode of Appeal: Ethos
Here the designers aim is to convince the viewer by image and text that the ships of the French Line afford the 'highest degree of perfection.' It's a very ethical appeal.


"Zermatt" Printed in Switzerland
Mode of appeal: Logos
The poster seems minimal but appealing probably to skiers by the logical signal in the bottom right hand corner–1620 meters.


"Protective foods. Be fit–include in your daily diet these protective foods." Printed in Melbourne, Australia
Mode of appeal: Pathos
The poster image and text make a plea–if you include these foods in your diet you will be protected. The designer is making an appeal to the viewers emotions.

Sample page layout for Gertrude


A sample page layout for a book design for Gertrude Stein, a French cubist writer (1874-1946). The design should mimic the cubist style.

Narrative in Sound & Motion: Two storyboards

On top of the three type storyboards, I've sketched three additional storyboards which are combinations of type and image (from the 1st animation).

I think I'm leaning towards this storyboard for the final piece. The earth hardens and cracks before the finger is able to poke the hole. I like the integration of the word 'earth' with the watering action, then the word 'earth' softens before the plant starts growing.

This seems a little more abstract but could work well I too. It has more integration between word and image compared to the first one and the word earth is duplicated in frame 20. This would give the idea of more happening than you might feel if there was only one word.

This I feel is the final and makes the most sense. For the first few frames it's just the word on its own, then it cuts to the image and back again. Later though, the text overlays on top of the image in fragments before softening into blob like shapes. I think my plan A would be to cut these hard letterforms out of wood. Like I used a green cushion in the initial animations to help make gardening look glamorous and fun, the addition of wood adds more fun and wood is always hard which emphasizes how much the ground really has to soften before you can plant.

Friday, September 25, 2009

Struggle

It's interesting I thought, recently, of how much struggle is a part of our lives and how much I get tired of it and don't want it anymore. When things get tough I want to one of two things: just get through as quick as possible or not be in it at all.

I'm in the process of getting to know someone new. I know this person has a lot of junk in their life, do I really want to get to know them, as a close friend, because they have all this baggage? Maybe I don't. That's kind of sad. That thought made me think of how I don't like struggle. I just want to be left alone. Selfish huh?

Struggle is a part of my life wether I like it or not. It's here to stay. Right now I'm at school and the projects come thick and fast, you really don't have a lot of time to rest easy; the deadlines are always on me. I seem to go in and out of struggle and it can get tiring. I reach a point of, "ah, yes, I've got it," and then I'm going down again saying, "I'm confused again" (more struggle).

I understand that without struggle, there would be no growth. If I refuse to struggle then I won't grow. If all I want to do is run from it (or people) and go sit on a couch by myself and watch TV, where is the growth and where is the change?

In nature there is struggle everywhere. It's all over the place. Plants struggle through the winter, calves struggle to walk, and a penguin struggles through the cold harsh weather to protect its egg. There's something in that. It would be interesting to go out walking in the fall and contemplate the beauty that comes out of the struggles found in nature. Maybe that would give me hope for getting through the tough bits.

For the next stage of my seed growing animation I am overlaying the word 'earth' doing three movements; hardening, cracking and softening. Hopefully this will simulate the process of struggle for the seed, that it starts in adverse conditions and dies but eventually out of it, comes a beautiful, edible plant.

Thursday, September 24, 2009

Narrative in Sound & Motion: Kinetic Type again

My noun that I'm going to work with is 'earth' and my three verbs that go with that are harden, crack and soften. Here are three ways to animate those verbs:


Project 2 - Modes of Appeal

“Can Vegetables, Fruit and the Kaiser Too”
Paul Verrees (1889–1942)
Poster promoting Victory gardens, USA,1918
(C) The National War Gardening Commission
Photograph from the International Poster Gallery www.internationalpostergallery.com

Since World War I started in 1914 many millions of men left their farms to go to t he battlefield. Many thousands of acres of ripe harvest during the summer were trampled and burned, causing massive shortages of food in France, Russia and England. supply. Food distribution from nation to nation came to a grinding halt. The nearest place where food could be produced was North America. By default, the burden landed on U.S. shoulders.

1916 was the toughest year on European and North American food reserves. Daily rations were at an all time low. Many attribute the disaster of 1917 on the Italian front to the shortage of food for soldiers on the battlefield. There had to be an increased production and supply of food production, lessening food consumption by rationing would not be enough.

Remaining men and women across America began to realize the only way to win the war effort was to begin gardening themselves and the collective accumulation of tiny droplets of food supply would result in a torrent of energy and stamina for those fighting on the field.

With this vision in mind, the only thing needed would be some kind of huge publicity effort in order to educate the people. Posters like this one by J. Paul Verrees were created to inspire the ‘war-gardener’ and put up in local towns and villages all across the United States.

Verrees was a Belgian, a soldier artist, wounded on the battlefields of the war while helping to defend his country. He was incapacitated for any further army service and came to the U.S. to pick up his profession as an artist. Another of his works include the poster ‘Join The Air Service And Serve In France’. He also painted pictures like “Tree Lined Path’, and ‘The Swans, Bruges' shown below.


Images from prices4antiques.com, allposters.com and skinnerinc.com

The “Can the Kaiser” poster, as it was known, was very effective in getting at the heart of the solution, what was needed to win the war. If Americans everywhere would grow vegetables on every available plot of land, the accumulating produce of millions of citizens would be enough to up the rations overseas, strengthen the soldiers and overturn the evil powers. In 1918, 5,285,000 war gardens like the one pictured below yielded 528,285,000 pounds of food.

Image from earthlypursuits.com - garden of a Chicago amateur.

Modes of communication employed in Verrees poster design:

Color
Lots of natural colors used to fit with the theme of gardening

Image
Pictures of jars and canned vegetables would have been extremely recognizable at the time but seeing the famous generals head in the jar, his hat on the top and and a sword attached to the outside would have drawn the connection between gardening and fighting. It would have brought the two things down onto the same level, meaning, to grow vegetables is just as important as fighting on the battlefield.

Text
There is clever use of ‘pun’ by the double meaning in ‘Can’–‘can’ as in vegetables, and ‘can’ as in shut up or close off the enemy.
The poster serves two uses; one would be stimulating and energizing the public, showing them that their gardening efforts would have huge dividends and the other would be to continue education by promotion of the free gardening book available from the National War Garden Commission in Washington D.C.
On the foremost jar containing the Kaiser’s head are the words “Kaiser Brand Unsweetened,” also used to reinforce the message of victory

Logos
The poster definitely promotes a very logical solution–can your goods, help win the war. By the time this poster was printed in 1918 the victory would have been imminent and gardeners all over the U.S were already producing and shipping many thousands of tons of foodstuffs to Europe.

Pathos
The poster also employs an emotional plea, “if you will commit to developing your own plot of land and cultivating it in order to make food and then preserve it, you will help us win the war.” The look on the Kaiser’s face is one of frustration and defeat.

Wednesday, September 23, 2009

Narrative in Sound & Motion: Kinetic Type

For this second project we're animating type. First off is a selection of two nouns from the Growing a Lettuce video, earth and seed, then think of ways to animate that word with three different nouns.

Next up are those nouns expounded:




Now I've pulled three of those animations to work from:

Sunday, September 20, 2009

Final Rhetoric Poster

The aim of this project is to attract attention to an evening of bluegrass by Mark O'Connor's Hot Swing Trio by creating a printed poster for the outside of the Folly Theatre and for use around the downtown area.

The graphic image I chose utilizes a visual pun: I replaced the arrow of the bow with a violin bow. Visually this contains a lot more meaning than say just showing a violin with Mark's name over it. By using visual rhetoric I am forcing the viewer to take a second glance at the graphic and answer a question. This extra time needed to view the image to 'figure out' what is going on means the image becomes more memorable in the mind of the viewer thus greater success in advertising/design.

Project Process & Deliverables:

1. Research Mark O'Connor: listen to his music, read press releases etc. My research began on Mark's website listening to his music, reading his bios, getting a feel for who he is and his unique style of music.

2. Use mind mapping techniques to ascertain symbols, icons and indexes to do with Mark's style of music: this is a great way to work. I made lists of subject matter from which I could pull single ideas into a matrix and begin sketching graphic images.

3. Collect imagery that is in line with the symbols, icons and indexes, specifically looking at color, type, style and image: it wasn't until I'd bought and downloaded three of Mark's pieces that I really began to feel the passion in his music and hear the sounds and see the images associated with it. It wasn't until this point that I really began to connect with the possibilities in designing for Mark.

4. Present findings to class.

5. Come up with 30 sketched ideas using the following rhetorical tropes: pun, metonymy, synecdoche, metaphor, allegory, hyperbole, personification, antithesis, parody and irony and insert sketches into a matrix. The most common rhetorical tropes I found images for were pun, metaphor and antithesis–metaphor being the highest scorer at 8 different ideas. Some of the other tropes were harder to come up with ideas for.

6. Select three of the 30 sketches and iterate out into five more ideas for each: this is where possible layouts began to take shape. We still weren't focusing on text yet but I got to see a few different possible designs begin to appear for the final poster. For me these iterations used differences in color, some figure/ground and hierarchy (placement of text and image).

7. Class crit and one on one crit with teacher and students.

8. Now we transferred our sketches into the computer and made some more iterations, this time placing in the Folly logo and ticket information along the bottom. At this point I had two designs I was making. Unfortunately I had to ditch one of the ideas, it being too detailed for a drive-by poster on the street.

9. Tightening iterations: this was perhaps the lengthiest part of the project and probably the most detailed. However by now I was down to just the one design. It's amazing how just a few minor adjustments here and there to color and text can make or break a poster design. It was at this point I began to break out of my own box, to explore avenues I'd not gone down before–I researched two Swiss poster designers from the 1950's and 60s one called Armin Hofmann and the other, Josef Muller Brockmann. Their work was highly inspirational and gave me more hope in the placement of my text to better coincide with the overall image.

10. Final crit and poster assembly.

11. Presentation.

Typography III: Gertrude Stein

On first reading Gertrude Stein's work I was amazed at how haphazard the form and structure and use of words. Upon researching Stein I'm learning more. Here's some interesting text from Wiki:

These stream-of-consciousness experiments, rhythmical word-paintings or "portraits", were designed to evoke "the excitingness of pure being" and can be seen as an answer to Cubism, plasticity and/or collage, in literature. Many of the experimental works such as Tender Buttons have since been interpreted by critics as a feminist reworking of patriarchal language. These works were loved by the avant-garde, but mainstream success initially remained elusive. Despite Stein's work on automatic writing with William James it is clear Stein did not see her own work as automatic, more as a 'excess of consciousness'.

Rather than a figure/ground relationship, "Stein in her work with words used the entire text as a field in which every element mattered as much as any other." It is a subjective relationship that includes more than one viewpoint, to quote Stein: "The important thing is that you must have deep down as the deepest thing in you a sense of equality."

She also avoided words with "too much association". "One consequence of developing value and essence as the basis of her work, rather than social themes, dramatic imagery or linear plots, is that she developed a remarkable objective voice. To an uncanny degree at times, social judgement is absent in her author's voice, as the reader is left the power to decide how to think and feel about the writing."

Stein’s innovative writing emphasizes the sounds and rhythms rather than the sense of words. By departing from conventional meaning, grammar and syntax, she attempted to capture “moments of consciousness,” independent of time and memory (Bartleby.com).

For my proposal I'm going to use Bembo, its revival beginning in the 1920's, Gertrude would have been in the prime of her career as a writer.

Saturday, September 19, 2009

Objectified: Deiter Rams

Perhaps the part of this film by Gary Hustwit I liked the most was the speech by Dieter Rams. What a brilliant designer. I liked his ten principles of good design:

Good design is innovative.
Good design makes a product useful.
Good design is aesthetic.
Good design helps us to understand a product.
Good design is unobtrusive.
Good design is honest.
Good design is durable.
Good design is consequent to the last detail.
Good design is concerned with the environment.
Good design is as little design as possible.

Taken from The Design Museum London (they're actually having an exhibition of his work November 18, 2009–March 7, 2010). Maybe I'll go home for Christmas!

Friday, September 18, 2009

Presentation Day!








Visual Language: Art & Copy Poster

I noticed this poster up in the stairwell of the Tivoli. A nice use of pun (the up turned pencil is visually similar to the rocket), metaphor (a comparison of two things that aren't alike), allegory (visual narrative) and maybe some hyperbole (the exaggeration of the pencil for emphasis).

Thursday, September 17, 2009

Narrative in Sound & Motion: nouns, verbs, type and sketches

My nouns for Project 2 are seed and earth.

Seed: expand, die, disintegrate
Earth: harden, soften, crack

These words will give more specific meaning to gardening, the life of a plant etc, that maybe people out there don't appreciate. For example, if you don't water the earth the seed will find it hard to expand and push out a shoot, and, unless the seed dies, you will not see a plant come up.

For the seed I will try out the following fonts: Futura, DIN, Frutiger Black

For the earth part I'm going to choose the following fonts: Impact (larger surface area), Bodoni, Univers Extra Black, Trajan Pro

A final poster design for Mark O'Connor

"Hi, my name is Tom. After being given the brief to design a poster for Mark O'Connor and then listening to his style of Americana/Bluegrass, I was really taken by his musical precision and agility so I've used the visual of a bow and arrow but replaced the arrow for a violin bow."

Tuesday, September 15, 2009

Mailer design



This 'mailer' advertises and shows off the typeface Bodoni BE Condensed. Initially my color palette was black with a salmon pink to mimic the Financial Times - Bodoni having a very business-like feel. However on studying and using the typeface further I changed the color palette to just black and white, the stark contrast and simplicity would really show off the letterforms, particularly when reproduced at large sizes.

My final color palette however is black and white, with yellow. The contrast of these two colors on white still shows off the letterforms but now adds panache and flamboyance to the business look, thus giving the typeface a much broader appeal—it not only looks professional for use in business, you might also use it in fashion.

The cityscape side is a poster. It's an abstract layout but has a lot of appeal in design and color to draw in the viewer/potential buyer. It has a small reference to Bodoni BE under the buildings.

The whole poster folds into four, the other side being the front, back and two initial inside panels. This side contains the full character set, three examples of ligatures, a total of six analphabetic symbols, a range of enlarged letterforms, a description of the typeface including the makers name, dates, key places in the development of the typeface and the typeface classification.

Friday, September 11, 2009

Group crit