The feedback was positive although they thought the background was too busy. We discussed using hand renderings and computer generated text as a good combination.
Here's an image of where I'm at so far. Still a ways to go on the final artifact but for now I'll be concentrating on recording the voice over for the video and producing an animatic with the existing rough storyboard.
looks great. get the type in there (and I do like your hand written text from the progress post below - but digital text would be good to explore too) and move on to that video.
ReplyDeletehowever, remember class comments about distribution of the file for the masses - so anyone can download, print and participate. Your size, bleed and use of color do limit what could be (and wants to be) a much more participatory product!