Plane design feedback

From the group crit:
1. The video will be a documentation of the communication process using the plane
2. Make a flash web page which has the communication diagram and a link to download the plane
3. Put the web address on the plane
4. The video should be able to stand alone - it's a mass communication tool, much greater audience than passing the piece of paper around
5. Finish up the plane design/layout and move into story boarding the video
6. Stage the video outside to fit with the icons of the wind and the rain, watch for clutter
7. Number the plane, this was helpful in the user testing to build the plane
8. Put scissor marks on the 11"x17"
9. Add more annotations (text) to the communication diagram under sender, receiver etc