As a group, our common denominators or shared critical approaches to the problem are linear, educational, instructional, narrative, user interaction.
Considering the projects objectives, here are some things that need to be added, altered or eliminated:
Jess - add playfulness and fun so that the flipping of the book stays engaging and not too repetitive, clarify copy.
Sean - clarify viewers choices with instructional page and design the glasses as an artifact.
Amanda - needs some graphical adjustment, a name, and box.
Tom - add some more user interaction to the video: click for the individual instructions, add color to make more visually engaging, also look at color coding to make instructions more clear, add website to the plane artifact.
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